Tuesday, April 21, 2015

Brianna Leuzzi- Rutgers Ban Essay




What's Jersey Sayin': Party Ban at Rutgers University. Dir. NJ.com. Perf. Janelle Griffith. Youtube.com. NJ.com, 07 Apr. 2015. Web. 21 Apr. 2015
 
Brianna Leuzzi
English 1101
Professor Young
Essay: 3

The effect of opinions

Figure 1. Binge Drinking. Binge Drinking.
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            “About four out of five college students drink alcohol. About half of college students who drink, also consume alcohol through binge drinking” (NIAAA). College students who drink excessively create problems for themselves and others. A recent increase in drinking problems at Rutgers University led to a campus wide ban on all fraternity and sorority parties. These sorority and fraternity parties, where heavy alcohol consumption is present, include many students of the University that attend. Specifically, these students, both Greek life members and not, are the ones directly affected by the Rutgers Ban. Therefore, how are students reacting to the  Rutgers Ban and how do the students think the problem should be solved?

            Overall, some students believe the ban is an extreme action taken by the University. These same students think that the ban is pointless. For example, student sophomore Shourie Jonna explains, “The ban is unnecessary and it is not a solution to the problems of the parties that get out of hand. It’s kind of an ineffective tactic to do it anyway” (Jonna). He believes that the Rutgers Ban is not doing anyone good or solving any of the concerning issues. In other words, it’s a waste of time. Thus, His feelings toward this ban are negative due to the unresolved conflicts. Instead, he suggests the University should take an alternate approach. His solution is as follows, “I feel like it’s putting a Band- Aid on a gushing wound. The school instead should hold more educational programs on the dangers of binge drinking” (Jonna). Shourie believes that binge drinking is the main problem and should be addressed. Instead of the school taking away drinking privileges for everyone, Rutgers should educate the students on proper consumption to prevent incidents from happening. Overall, there is a negative reaction to the Rutgers ban and a belief that a better solution can solve the ongoing drinking problem.
Figure 2. Thumbs Down. Thumbs Down.
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            Additionally, more students agree that the choice of Rutgers University to ban all parties was a poor decision. Rutgers cannot prevent wild parties and drinking related problems in the future by issuing a ban. For instance, a 21 year old junior, Magda Purchla, argues, “I’m not sure if a temporary ban would be effective in stopping out- of- control parties. The issue could easily arise again next year” (Purchla). Rutgers University is not thinking of long term solutions to the problem, its only concern is fixing the problem right now. Rather, the University should look at the big picture. A ban is no solution to the underlying problem; it’s like trying to fix a car but not knowing what is wrong with it. How can the car be fixed without addressing the problem of the car first? The same goes for the ban, the school is trying to solve party problems without addressing the underlying problem, drinking. Purchla agrees that Rutgers should find a different approach to the problem. She states, “It might be helpful to educate Greek organizations about preventing serious incidents and helping students act more responsibly at parties” (Purchla). Magda initiates an active plan for students to follow in order to take preventative measures in the future. All in all, another negative reaction and a better solution is provided for the Rutgers Ban problem.

            Although, some students believe that the ban is beneficial and can improve fraternity and sorority problems. Some students consider the ban a great way to improve authority throughout the University. For example, junior Phinehas Lezuabah explains, “The ban is a great way for students to take serious the liabilities issues that parties can create” (Lezuabah). He is saying that the ban will make the hosts of the party more aware of the consequences they might face when throwing these parties. Therefore, people such as Lezuabah believe the ban is beneficial to the University. A solution can be reached with the ban because more people are aware of the consequences. Phinehas agrees when he states, “Recent alcohol-related incidents were preventable, but people just didn’t pay attention” (Lezuabah). In this case, because light was shed on the problem, more people are going to pay attention and try to avoid the issues from occurring again. Therefore, the ban will solve the problem because students will want to prevent another ban from happening again.
Figure 3. No Parties Allowed. Ban on Parties.
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Web. 21 Apr. 2015.
        Also, without the ban, alcohol related problems could have spiraled out of control during the rest of the year. Many of the students understand that the ban is due to an increase in alcohol related problems over the semester. Student Nina Reyes agrees by saying, “I can understand why they would put a ban. The ban is necessary to prevent future incidents” (Reyes). She, along with others, understand that in order to fix the problem, everyone has to stop having parties. Concluding that the ban is an overall provides a good choice and provides a good solution. Even though it may be inconvenient for some students the general affect will benefit everyone. Reyes approves by saying, “The semester is almost over; if a temporary ban can save the system, it might be worth it” (Reyes). Even though the ban is not everyone’s ideal plan for celebrating the end of the semester, its necessary to prevent problems from happening in the future.
            All in all, the reactions to the Rutgers Ban are mixed between believing it is beneficial and a waste of time. Solutions across the board also differ as students feel differently about the situation. So, is the Rutgers ban really effective for everyone? The underlying of binge drinking needs to be addressed. All college students should be aware of what they are drinking and how much they are drinking to keep himself or herself safe. Saftey during these years are becoming a huge issue because many students don’t realize how intoxicated they are.

 

Works Cited

College Drinking." College Drinking. National Institute of Alcohol Abuse and Alcoholism, n.d.

            Web. 16 Apr. 2015.

South, Todd, and Mary Diduch. "Rutgers Bans Fraternity, Sorority Parties through End of

            Semester." NorthJersey.com. North Jersey, 06 Apr. 2015. Web. 16 Apr. 2015.

Thank You Carlton West Jr.

Brianna Leuzzi
Fairleigh Dickinson University
285 Madison Avenue
Madison, NJ 07940

April 21, 2015

Carlton West Jr.
2437 Kennon Avenue
Norfolk, VA 23513

Dear Mr. West,

       Thank you for taking the time out of your day to come speak to my English class. I know you traveled a fairly long distance just to talk with us for a few minutes. I found the way you spoke so interesting because your voice and emotions alone grabbed everyone's attention. Usually, when guest speakers come in or if I have to listen to someone make a speech, I become bored and stop listening within the first few minutes. However, you were different. I thought the way you portrayed your message and used your voice to accentuate the story was fascinating. I know that it kept me interested the entire time without becoming bored. Also, I thought your speech was creative, you used different examples and words that made it flow very well. You are a great public speaker and should be proud of that because many people struggle to have the talent that you have. Overall, I enjoyed your speech and am grateful I got to hear it. Thank you again for your time and effort, it was very much appreciated.

                                                                     Sincerely,
                                               
                                           Brianna Leuzzi